Hey guys, here's my first pass at storytelling poses for my shot. Just curious how it reads to you guys. Also, I wanted to have his left hand stuck on the block/gameboy but the constraint gods were displeased for some reason and strange things happened, so it's just kind of hanging there for now.

Hey Tyler - good start but I'm having a little bit of trouble reading the the two emotional states from your face shapes. I think they are Satisfied/Content -> Happy/Ecstatic? Are those close? There seems to be a third one in between that is confusing me as well. Can you explain the idea a bit? I think it will allow me to give you better feedback if I understand what you're going for!
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