Hello Victor, If you have a minute could you voice your opinion on whether any one of these dialogue choices tickle your fancy? If not then its straight to the Pantomime shelf. If anyone wants to voice their opinion that would be great as well. Thanks much guys. See you Thursday.
I like the first one, but I don't know what the emotional change is, it sounds more like she's trying to hide an emotion (which is interesting) but I don't know if that totally fits the criteria?
ReplyDeleteThe last one seems like it fits! Are there any you feel particularly excited about?
Hey Elissa,
ReplyDeleteI like the first. I agree with you but I was hoping that the change could in emotion could first come from her amazement/disbelief of just telling her husband that its over, then followed by the realization that its over so almost a moment at the end where she's just bombarded with a mix of emotions, she's doing everything she can to hold it together.
I also like the last ;)
DeleteHi John, these are some nice, nuanced clips, but I don't feel like there's a clear change in any of them. Unless you've got some more you want to pitch, I would go for the pantomime.
ReplyDeleteSounds good. I'll see if I have some time to find some others by end of day. If not I'll start putting together the pantomime.
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