Yes! That's what I have to say, that feels more believable to me. Something doesn't sit right about those thumbs to me, I don't have a ball like object like that to try this on but I feel like maybe the thumb would be around the back part of the ball more if that makes sense? I might be wrong about that so maybe see if it bothers anyone else.
Hi Kyle, this is looking good! A couple small adjustments: - the look to screen left feels a bit early. I would delay it until frame 55 and then short - around frame 80 there is a head move and slight expression change that I'm not quite reading. I think it's the start of his struggle to say the word "favor", but it's not clear enough yet. Try putting more tension in the brows and mouth, and maybe have his eyes glance back closer to the ball. It could even be an eye roll to suggest embarrassment. - he seems to die over the last 6 frames. Try to keep his pose and eyes alive.
Yes! That's what I have to say, that feels more believable to me. Something doesn't sit right about those thumbs to me, I don't have a ball like object like that to try this on but I feel like maybe the thumb would be around the back part of the ball more if that makes sense? I might be wrong about that so maybe see if it bothers anyone else.
ReplyDeleteHi Kyle, this is looking good! A couple small adjustments:
ReplyDelete- the look to screen left feels a bit early. I would delay it until frame 55 and then short
- around frame 80 there is a head move and slight expression change that I'm not quite reading. I think it's the start of his struggle to say the word "favor", but it's not clear enough yet. Try putting more tension in the brows and mouth, and maybe have his eyes glance back closer to the ball. It could even be an eye roll to suggest embarrassment.
- he seems to die over the last 6 frames. Try to keep his pose and eyes alive.